use to chhor aaya, but lamha chura ke,
chupke se,
jeb me rakh lia.
raat to takiya ke niche rakh ke soya,
n subhe se baar baar use jeb se nikal ke dekh raha hu,
aur yuhin muskura raha hu..
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5 comments:
Nice poem. You should seriously think about taking it further, it is a gift, u know? Keep it up...
i liked the sentiments behind the lines... but what i enjoyed more was the use of 'but' and 'n' in a predominantly Hindi stanza.
:) pata nahi isko absent-mindedness kahenge ya going with d flow..
isko "colonised" mind kahenge. :P
chup saale! :D
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